Saturday, 22 December 2007 @ 10:52 pm
New chapter
Whoots!!! New chapter up! Chapter 1 will be split into different parts because the whole chapter is far too long. Haha. So here comes...
Ally's Chronicles - Book one
Chapter one part one
“Spring, the season when flowers blooms.” A boy said happily to himself as he looked at the flowers across the garden.
“Good afternoon. mister, the flowers sure are beautiful this year!” He shouted to the elderly gardener who was watering the plants.
The gardener beamed proudly at him and replied. “Thank you, Jake. The flowers are nice aren’t they?”
Jake nodded in agreement. “Yes they are! I got to go now, bye!” He waved as he headed off.
Humming as he walked, he was just walking around a corner when he heard someone shouting urgently, “Your highness! Princess Alexabdra! Where are you?”
Stopping, he turned towards the sound as he knew that voice. It was Tutor Sherennda, Tutor of Princes Alexabdra, who is the Crown Princess of Irtland.
He had caught glimpses of the princess before. She is a year younger than he was, about ten years old. She had big, almond-shaped, violet eyes and long, dark blond hair that flowed down to her waist. Her hair colour came from her mother, who was an elf. Only elves had blond hair. She had also inherited her mother’s height, for she was tall for her age. Her ears however, were humane like her father. She was also intelligent and a quick learner from what he heard from the Tutors. The Tutors are people who are skilled in a specific elemental magic. However, the Princess was said to be a cold and emotionless person, and she doesn’t interact with people much.
“The Princess’s missing?” He wondered aloud.
It is impossible for the Princess to go missing… He parents must be worried…. Her parents…
“Her parents, huh?” His shoulders started stoop and his face grew slightly sad. His parents were unknown to him, he was an orphan. The old stable master found him eleven summers ago, on his doorstep. From that day onwards, he had been raised by the kindly old man. He was grateful for his foster father’s help, if it weren’t for him, he would not have come so far… Nevertheless, he still wondered about his past when he was lonely. Perhaps his father is a farmer? Or maybe even a noble man! Maybe he was kidnapped when he was young and was actually a king’s son! His eyes always shone and his heart soared when he thought about the thousand possibilities.
Or perhaps, he continued with a soft sigh,
I am the offspring of a whore.
Kicking the stones at his feet, Jake gave a deeper sigh.
Will I ever know who I am? He wondered as he looked up to the vast azure blue sky.
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Author's note: Nothing much to say about this chapter... Just that the chapter starts a thousand year later from the prolouge.
There's a introduction to one of the main characters, Jake. Jake is Trainee, a warrior/soldier - in - training. (In case some of you are not sure.). Also a slight mention of Princess Alexabdra, the Crown Princess of Irtland (The country which Jake is in) and also Tutor Sherennda, an elemental mage.
The rest of the chapter will come soon. ^^ Meanwhile pls comment on this part one. ^^ Thank you!
~ Princess Enna
P.S I am painfully aware of how much the blgoskin doesn't suit the stories. But I will keep to it first Haha. Until I can find a better one or something. :)
*Warning* As I am a super fussy person, the whole chapter has already underwent 4 to 5 major edits even before i posted it. What I am trying to tell you is that the chapter might undergo changes in the future (May it be big or small). (The prolouge had been edited already) But don't worry, if there are any major changes, (I will most likely not be editing grammar or spelling mistakes....) I will edit the post and inform all of you. Arigatou.
